I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In Social Studies we have been learning about the importance of oceans to the world. We have started by looking at the Plastic issue in the Great Pacific Garbage Patch. We have been assigned to do a Slide Show.
Hi kahciar i adore your slideshow i think it really goes into detail about everything you have learned so for during this topic. I did notice that you had the same writing for two slides, im sure that was a mistake but thought i would let you know so you can fix it! Other than that i thought it was perfect you had a good amount of info about the issue and you had photos to go along with it! This was awesome cant wait to see more of your work!
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Hi kahciar i adore your slideshow i think it really goes into detail about everything you have learned so for during this topic. I did notice that you had the same writing for two slides, im sure that was a mistake but thought i would let you know so you can fix it! Other than that i thought it was perfect you had a good amount of info about the issue and you had photos to go along with it! This was awesome cant wait to see more of your work!
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