Thursday April 4th 2019
Today, we had to create our Story Board for our Art Hurumanu. Our story is about Two Bully's who
bully a innocent student. Then one of her best friends stick up for her and tell the bully's why it's not good and the bully take the advice and don't bully anymore.
Our next step is to finish the Storyboard Sketch and fix up our handwriting.
Feedback from another group:
Positive: We liked how you labelled the people so we can see who's, who.
Helpful: You could probably do your handwriting a little bit better.
Thoughtful: We like the way that you drew the props so that we can see what they are.
Also finish it !!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, April 4, 2019
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hello Kachiar i really like your story board that you and your group made. maybe you can add some more drawings in ur storyboard
ReplyDeleteHi Liyah!
DeleteI'm glad you like our storyboard. And, we have finished it! I just need to update the photo. Thanks!